Moment in time…
There is no time to lick the luscious smear off my face, as I desperately try to grab a breath, before bobbing back under the gloopy mess. My eyes are scrunched shut to avoid flying explosions that splatter like paint pellets. Thick dribbles run down my chin in camouflage design. Chocolate boils around my flailing arms as I trying to stay afloat.
Remember - think carefully before making a wish as it might come true!
Allana - teacher
Can you answer thee questions about my attempt at the 100 word challenge?
What changes between the paragraphs?
Who is talking?
What tense is used - past, present, future?
What similes are used?
Why are there three paragraphs?