Tuesday, 18 June 2013

100word challenge - Maggie and Isabella M

The Hunt!
A man named Tim went on an adventure to find the gold hidden in the jungle.
As he walked past the gummy leaves, he saw birds and bugs as big as baked beans!

Then he saw a robot, who was the keeper of the gold. The robot whispers in Tim's ear "I know where the gold is."
"Thank you," says Tim, with a smile. They set off on their adventure with the robot saying where to go.
Tim starts to see a shining light. It's the end. The gold! He runs and turns to say thanks, but the robot has run away.

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